Parable

[Kim]

My lips are zipped but she's being very clever.  I'm impressed. 

[Rosie]

Jan 16, 2021 21:10:14 GMT -5 charity said:

Are you finding pictures or drawing them?

I'm not saying nothing more until its done and then I will maybe most likely show it to you if you want to see it. 

[Jennifer]

I know I'd like to see it.

[scarlette]

Ha!  She found a way to be on the computer without being told she's been on it long enough.

[Kim]

I guess that makes her smart. 

[Rosie]

Maybe smart but maybe not so smart to. I been working so hard on this crazy thing and then last night it sort of ruined itself cause it lost some stuff or something.  I don't know but its like starting all over again today.  Its a good thing I got all of today to try to figure out what happened and fix it.  I better get a good mark on this stupid thing.

[Kittykat]

Was it on the computer? A lot of programs have a backup or auto-save feature that it might have saved it to.

[Rosie]

I finished it!  It's not the greatest job ever but I honest did work hard and I hope people will understand what the lesson is supposed to be.  

[Frank]

Rosie, this is very good. I guess you are expressing how you see your life so far as a parable.

[Jennifer]

That is excellent.  Are you talking about yourself?  I think it's about change happening only if you trust.  I don't think I could do as good a job as you did and I have several years on you.

[Tatiana]

Rosie that is really great. The music is kind of sad but fitting. You better get an A on that.

[Rosie]

Jan 18, 2021 15:28:47 GMT -5 Frank said:

Rosie, this is very good. I guess you are expressing how you see your life so far as a parable.

I guess maybe sort of a little bit?  I don't know but mostly i think when something gets wrote the person has to have some part of her in it right?  I wasn't meaning for it to be me expressing me I guess but some of it I can see that in it.  Like I want to trust and I used to trust maybe to much but now its hard because you do get hurt bad with trusting.  I don't know.  I guess I'm kind of crazy and so  maybe I think weird or something but I figure the monster is them things that hurt the girl who I named after my great grandma who died not very long ago.  I don't know.  It all just come to me when I started.  You know I didn't know what I wanted it to be about but I was thinking about leaving your comfort zone thing and then it turned out to be meaning something different as I went along.

[Rosie]

Jan 18, 2021 16:34:19 GMT -5 Jennifer said:

That is excellent.  Are you talking about yourself?  I think it's about change happening only if you trust.  I don't think I could do as good a job as you did and I have several years on you.

Thank you.  You know my mom and dad kept having to go over it so I would write it right so if it wasn't for them it wouldn't be very good you know and maybe my mom and dad are older than you.

[Rosie]

Jan 18, 2021 19:17:39 GMT -5 Tatiana said:

Rosie that is really great. The music is kind of sad but fitting. You better get an A on that.

I would like to get a A on it cause I worked hard on it but probably my ELA teacher will have corrections and then I won't get no A but maybe in my Bible class I'll get a A.  I had a  hard time finding music for it but I didn't want for it to be like flutes and happy or Justin Bieber   so I just found that and it seemed ok but I don't like how it ends the music I mean but I don't know how to do that any different you know.

[charity]

That's really good Rosie.  I liked it a lot.